Locke (l0x0r)'s status on Wednesday, 06-Apr-11 02:40:10 UTC
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@chistery !writeponies I read that one back when EQD posted all the contest entries. I thought it was really good personally, no grammatical errors I saw, and great pacing. The ending was kind of a downer though. It would be great if you wrote a sequel with more happiness involved. I'd go into more depth, but wouldn't want to spoil it further for those who've yet to read it.